My fanfic xD

wow! nice!! it woud be awesome if you'll make a trailer or something else with drawings.

this is something I did before hand.

good

well done TSZ!

ok, here the next chapter. I think is a normal one (not so funny) but there some interestings things ^^

jaimeCTR: jejejeje. Prepare yourself Amaraticando
(GOD) Amaraticando:

In Citadel City...

(HA) ozuba: we have to do something
(TA) David: yeah...
(TA) vivecrash:
(TA) djamfctr:
(TA) David: ok, Titans B, C, D and those little Heros, go to home now. This is serious, let the work to us.
(TB) BlackFrieza: what??!!
(TC) alpha-plus: hey you can't give us orders.
(TA) lepetitkeltois:
(HA) Rento:
(HA) ozuba:
(TD) Tesha:
(TC) alpha-plus:
(TC) nitro_david:
(TC) Lorys:
(TB) BlackFrieza:
(TA) lepetitkeltois: GO THE FUCKING OUT NOW!!!

Rento, ozuba, Tesha, alpha-plus, nitro_david, Lorys, BlackFrieza: ok!! sorry!

(TB) BlackFrieza: I will back!! I promise!!

(HA) Rento: Do you think they can fix it all?
(TD) Tesha: yes.. they are Titans A.... braves Titans A

(TA) lepetitkeltois: ok guys, better ask help to GODs, we don't know if that boss is so powerfull
(TA) David: yes, come on to the GOds
(TA) djamfctr: im agree
(TA) vivecrash: but act like we are braves
(TA) lepetitkelyois: yeah, come on! guys! lets to kick cheaters ass!!
(TA) David: grrr!! yes!!
(TA) djamfctr: come one! grrr!!
(TA) vivecrash: fucking cheaters! grrrrr!!

Titans A went to the fixed GODs portal and call to the door...

Meanwhile... The race between Amaraticando and jamiteCTR was about to start! It was in Coco Park!

(GOD) Amaraticando: I will race with all my skills!
jaimeCTR: hehehe ok, it will be a 5 laps race...

the race began! JaimeCTR started with an amazing speed /(GOD) Amaraticando: WTF!! /. Amaraticando started good too, but not so fast as jaimeCTR.

(GOD) Amaraticando: damn it! he is using cheats since the beginning!

Amaraticando got saffi.

jaimeCTR: is useless. haha, you know it!
(GOD) Amaraticando: damn it, he's right..

Amaraticando charged energy and got USF with saffi. He got closer to jaimeCTR and take the turns correctly. jaimeCTR run with a great speed but he can't take the turns so right as Amaraicando.

(GOD) Amaraticando: I see your weakness, you can't run professionally. You aren't so good after all
jaimeCTR: shut up!

jaimeCTR throws a bowling bomb to Amaraticando and he got hitten.

(GOD) Amaraticando: damn you!

Amaraticando got USF and saffi again, and he charged more energy for a Clock! /jaimeCTR: you couldn't / Amaraticando activated CLock! But jaimeCTR activate blue shield before! jaimeCTR passed the first lap while Amaraticando was in the bump before the last turn. / (GOD) Amaraticando: damn it!/ Amaraticando passed the first lap... and suddenly the track changed! / (GOD) Amaraticando: WTF??!! / the track changed to Tiger Temple! Amaraticando went forward and missed the shortcut.

(GOD) Amaraticando: shit! i have to be carefull!! it changes each lap!

Meanwhile in GODs portal...

(TA) David: WTF are doing the GODs??!! They doesnt opent the door!
(TA) djamnfctr: im becoming impatient

The GODs portal was openned...

(GOD) luca103: damn, where is V4E? He is the doorman!

In V4E's room...

(GOD) V4E: I'm sorry Veronica, but i love to Giullia!!
Veronica: No V4E! don't forget me please! Your nick! remember? "Veronica 4 Ever"!!! YOu have to love me still!!
(GOD) V4E: NO!... I'm sorry...
Veronica: But she doesn't love you! And you know it!
(GOD) V4E: Don't tell me that

GODs portal...

(GOD) luca103: what do you want?
(TA) lepetitkelois: emm... we... ne..need.. y..yoo.. your .. help.... .... ... p... please.
(GOD) luca103: hahaha lepetitgaytois ask me for help!
(TA) David: hey luca, Amaraticando is run with a strong cheater now, maybe he will lose.. well, he will lose. So, you have to run with him.
(GOD) luca103: mmmm i don't know... what i will win?
(TA) djanmfctr:
(TA) vivecrash: the cheater has a big pennis
(GOD) luca103: really?? OK! lets GO!!

keep comment guys

the end is fuckin' funny jajajaj LMAO

Somehow, V4E will get crazy when he reads this fanfic. And WTF?
Bombs on Time Trial lol

NICE JOB DOBER

yess

jaimeCTR wrote:

You think you can beat me? hahaha! I challenge you for a race... where everything is legal.

And you acept the challenge

Dober wrote:

(GOD) luca103: mmmm i don't know... what i will win?
(TA) djanmfctr:
(TA) vivecrash: the cheater has a big pennis
(GOD) luca103: really?? OK! lets GO!!

great end, poor luca
Hey great job Dob, hope to v4e see this soon

Wait! How does vive-crash know it??? jajaja ^

Maybe vivecrash saw it in the bathroom

good chapther.

Ok, sorry for the late, i couldn't use LinkZer's PC. And sorry for the not so funny chapter but its important for the next and last chapter of my first FANFIC!

David, luca, lepetitkeltois, djamnfctr and vivecrash are going to jaimeCTR's world...

(TA) David: hey, wait, where is that world?
(TA) lepetitkeltois: ...
(TA) djamnfctr: its true, where we are going to?
(GOD) luca:

(TA) David: look! is that fucking Neo2!
(TA) vivecrash: let's see what he have...
(TA) David: I found this! Its looks like that blue sphere... mmm i'll activate it... (click!)

David disapeared of there!

(TA) lepetitkeltois: what!!! where is he??
(GOD) luca: °_°

(TA) David: whaaaa!! (pom!) where I am?
Veronica: aaahhh!! who are you!! you flatted V4E!!
(GOD) V4E: damn you david... get out of my head
(TA) David: ok... but where I am?
(GOD) V4E: you are in my room!! how the f*ck you get in???
(TA) David: id teleported here mmm hey, we need y.. ahh nevermind
Veronica:
(GOD) V4E: get out.
(TA) David: f*ck you, bye!

....

(TA) David: I have to become GOD! I will get it!

Meanwhile in jaimeCTR world....

(GOD) Amaraticando: oh boy... im tired... i can't stand up anymore... i got many hits of his rockets
jaimeCTR: last lap Amaraticando! last lap!
(GOD) Amaraticando: damn you... im in fourth lap still

(TA) vivecrash: mmmm
(TA) djamnfctr: what happened to David?
(TA) lepetitkeltois: i don't know

Hey guys!!!

(TA) lepetitkeltois: uh?
(TA) vivecrash: who is he?
(GOD) luca: °.°?

(GOD) BlackFrieza: Its me!!!

(TA) djamnfctr: BlackFrieza! you're GOD now!
(GOD) BlackFrieza: yes!!
(TA) lepetitkeltois: congrats

POOOOM!!!! a body fell in the floor!

(TA) lepetitkeltois: what?
(TA) vivecrash: Amaraticando!

(GOD) Amaraticando: buuuu

(TA) djamnfctr: what happened?
(GOD) Amaraticando: that fucking cheater of hell!!
(GOD) luca: you are noob.

In Turbo Track.. David was runing...

(TA) David: grrr!! I can't run faster! damn it!

Stop please!!

(TA) David: what the...??
Sheyla: Hi David
(TA) David: OMG! Sheyla! What a surprise!
Sheyla: Can you take me for a walk?
(TA) David: of course!!!!

(GOD) Amaraticando: ok, this plan can't be wrong! let's go!
(GOD) luca: yeah
(GOD) BlackFrieza: yeah
(TA) lepetitkeltois: ye..
(GOD) BlackFrieza:
(TA) vivecrash: eerrmm... the last was a joke..
(TA) djamnfctr: yes... just a little joke...
(GOD) BlackFrieza: This is only for GODs, get out of here, little titans.
(TA) lepetitkeltois: but...
(GOD) BlackFrieza: OUT!!!!!!!!
lepetitkeltois,vivecrash,djamnfctr: ok!!

Sheyla: This is all the faster that you can go?
(TA) David: ehm..
Sheyla: What a pity... I would let you have sex with me if you could go faster
(TA) David: OK!!!!!!! here we go!!!!!!!

(GOD) Amaraticando: we will need the anothers GOD's help...
(GOD) luca: with me is enough
(GOD) BlackFrieza: let's call to Kang please!!!
(GOD) Amaraticando: I'll call to V4E...
...
Veronica: Hello?
(GOD) Amaraticando: ehh.. V4E?
Veronica: He isn't heeelp!! call later, bye.
(GOD) Amaraticando: eh... pip. He isn't.

Veronica: now we will have sex
V4E: nooo!! unleash me please!!! I don't want to have sex with you!! Y love Giullia!!!
Veronica: too late, darling
V4E: nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

(GOD) Amaraticando: damn it. We don't know where is crash68, sambennett is retired, pardiez too
(GOD) BlackFrieza: seems its only we 3.
(GOD) luca: °_°

(GOD) David: YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! I got it!!!! Im GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sheyla: good David ooh yes! now you can do with me what you want
(GOD) David: yeeeeeeeeeeeah! come here baby!

David, kiss her and down his hands to her ...... oh, well, imagine the rest.

(GOD) Amaraticando: ok guys.. here i have the blue sphere, let's go!



comments pls and wait for the last chapter

jajajaja kkkk LMAO

VERY FUNNY! finally we are gonna destroy this jaimeCTR!!!

and evryone is having sex now, David, V4E, ETC

Very good one, Dober, let's wait the last chapter!!!

jajajajaj poor alessandro

Great joob Dob, u will be the funiest guy of the forum

That was cool

(ED) Jacotte: Wrayder? what are you doing? I told you at 6 o'clock!
(TB) Wrayder: ok! i go now! bye. Sorry Linkz, i have to go.

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Make an Fanfic with video of game, and post on youtube !!

We are waiting Dober

I know, sorry, I had not any time for think the the last chapter and much less post it. But I promisse soon I'll be able for do it!

you are perfect in my part xddddddd

Amaraticando, luca and BlackTeamFreezing (He changed his name) appeared in jaimectr's world

jaimectr: what are you doing here???

(GOD) Amaraticando: let's run jaime!!!! this time We won't loose!!!
jaimectr: hahahahah ok

Wait!

everybody: ah?

Master Spider: Its me!!

everybody: OMG!!!

Master Spider explodes all the universe and he is the one who stay alive.

The End.

PD: I'm sorry so much, but i have not any ideas

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha best end ever

try to do a fanfic where i am the evil and the other player try to beat me but not with results

luca103 wrote:

try to do a fanfic where i am the evil and the other player try to beat me but not with results

he is younger than 15 years old

There's no need to do a fanfic for that. The real CTR world is exactly what u said