My fanfic xD

i don't know maybe yes

Dober wrote:

i don't know maybe yes

YEA

orry for the late again here the... I dont remember chapter

enjoy it

In Citadel City appeared Rento, Tesha, Lorys, ozuba, lells, aplha-plus and nitro_david.

(TD) ozuba: where is BlackFrieza?
(TC) Lorys: he went to train...
(HA) ozuba: ah..
(HA) Rento: ok, let's go to the N Gin Labs Warp!

In N. Gin Labs vive-crash was first in the part after the barrels, but David an lepetitkeltois passed him in the last turn. djanmfctr was a bit far of they but Neo2 and Neo1 was begin the square turn still.

Neo1: I can't believe this!

lepetitkeltois took the STP and took the best route till the finish, David in second, vive-crash third and djanmfctr close to him. Neo2 and Neo1 was in the part after the holes.

In Citadel City..

(TD) Tesha: damn it, the race is closed, we can't enter.
(TC) alpha-plus: i bet Titans A are winning.
(HA) Rento: that i hope...
(TC) Lorys: just click that buttom
(TD) Tesha: ok... (click!)
(HA) Rento: oh! now we can see the rance by this screen!
(TC) alpha-plus: by the way, how did you evolve to Hero A, Rento?
(HA) Rento: only was a little time and you? I see you Titan C
(TC) alpha-plus: just a little time too
(TD) Tesha: me too
(TD) lells: me too

In Gin Labs, second lap, lepetitkeltois was first followed by David very close, vive-crash and djamfctr was close too but a little far from David. Neo1 and Neo2 was far away.

Neo1: no way, it's time to use USF!
Neo2: ok

Suddenly Neo1 and Neo2 got USF, and passed djamfctr and vive-crash, they was about to catsh David!

(TA) vive-crash: WTF?!
(TA) djamfctr: how they get USF!! we are about to reach the first STP of the track yet!

(TC) alpha-plus: did you see that?!
(TC) Lorys:
(TD) Tesha: how they got that!?
(TD) lells:

In the Turbo Tunel, Neo2 and Neo1 was fighting with David for the second place.

(TA) David: Damn you two cheaters!

They go out the tunnel and Neo1 and Neo2 passed David quickly and was with lepetitkeltois.

(TA) lepetitkeltois: cheaters of hell! take this!

lepetitkeltois throw a Bowling Bomb to they both and they fall to abysm after the barrels. David, passed them, then, vive-crash and djamfctr.

(TA) David: good one keltois
(TA) djamfctr: yeah

(TD) lells: how could he throw a bomb??!
(TC) Lorys: He is almost GOD, so, he can throw some weapons if the race becomes illegal..
(TB) BlackFrieza: guys!! im back!!
(TC) alpha-plus hi bla... WTF!!!! are you Titan B!!!?
(TC) Lorys: OMG?!
(TB) BlackFrieza: yeah the train gave good results
(TD) Tesha:
(TD) lells:
(HA) Rento:
(HA) ozuba:

I third lap Neo1 and Neo2 got unlimited USF again in the barrels part.

Neo1: wahahahaha
Neo2: now you will lose

In the square turn..

(TA) lepetitkeltois: we dosn't think so

Neo1 and Neo2 passed the barrels but then hey noticed many Nitros in the road.

Neo1 and Neo2: OH NO!!!!!

They crashed!

lepetitkeltois, David, vive-crash, djamfctr:

The race was finished, lepetitkeltois in first place, David in second place, vive-crash in third, djamnctr in fourth and Neo1 and Neo2 in fifth and sixth respectively.

They appeared in Citadel City and look at Lorys, BlackFrieza, alpha-plus, lells, Tesha, Rento and ozuba...

(TA) David: Whatare doing Heros here?
(TC) Lorys: emm, was urgent... because these cheaters!
(TA) lepetitkeltois: ok, now you two have to tell us who are you.

keep comment please

XD great dober,great.we can hardly wait new part.keep writing,it is funny

you are an artist to write stories
good ones

good chapther.

Good one Dob

titan A rulz lol

Davidctr72 wrote:

titan A rulz lol

Nah, Expert A rules, IF WE WERE INCLUDED!!!!!!

Great one, can't wait to see if the Gods take them on.

Yes, very nice, go on!

Sorry for the late again. But here a new chapter! enjoy it!

Neo1: We can't say our names...
(TD) Tesha: aaaaaarrgh!!! tell us your fucking names!!!

Suddenly someone came there...

(TA) David: who are y... WHAT??!!
Fernando:
(TB) BlackFrieza: it's Fernando Mingroni??!!

in the GOD's portal.... CRASH!!!.... the portal was broken...

(GOD) Amaraticando: FERNANDO???!!!! I HEARD FERNANDO!!!??? WHEEEEEEEERE!!!
(GOD) V4E: calm down Amarat..
(GOD) Amaraticando: SHUT UP!! AND FIX THE PORTAL!! I'LL GO FOR THAT FUCKING EMO!!
(GOD) V4E: ok...

Amaraticando run at high speed!

(GOD) V4E: What sense have to be GOD if i'm the doorman?

Titan's Citadel City...

(TA) vive-crash: what the fucking are you doing here?
Fernando: don't made me feel sad, please I challenge you for a race... those guys.. Neo1 and Neo2 are just bots.
(TC) alpha-plus: i knew it...
(TA) lepetitkeltois: ok, i acept the challenge
Fernando: oh thanks

(GOD) Amaraticando: STOOOOOOOOOOOOP!!!!!!

Amaraticando throw a strong rocket!! it goes to Fernando's face ...!!! but he walk at side and avoid the rocket and...!! the rocket crash with lells. lells explodes in 1000 parts and begins to rain his blood for everywhere. Everybody open their umbrellas.

(GOD) Amaraticando: ups...
(HA) Rento: What a lucky we bring our umbrellas
(HA) Tesha: Yeah

Fernando starts to cry.

(TA) David: why you cry gay?
Fernando: someone died
(TA) David: come on, was just lells
(GOD) Amaraticando: I will kill you crappy EMO!!
Fernando: no no no!! oh please nooo!

Amaraticando charges a Warp Orb...

(TB) BlackFrieza: This time be sure you will shoot him.
Fernando: noo please!! i will tell it to my boss!
(GOD) Amaraticando: Who is your boss?
Fernando: I will take you with him..
(GOD) Amaraticando: Ok.
Fernando: But promisse dont kill me please??
(GOD) Amaraticando: yeah, sure.
Fernando: Ok. Take this. (Fernando gave him a blue sphere) It will teleports you with my boss
Amaraticando: Thanks, now go to motherfucking hell, motherfucking EMO

Amaraticando throws a Warp Orb to him (everybody get out far away)

Fernando: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Fernando died too.

(GOD) Amaraticando: Now i'll go to kill his boss.
(TA) vive-crash: now you are very happy
(GOD) Amaraticando: yes. Fernando died
(TA) lepetitkeltois: Wait a moment. You will go alone to kill his boss?
(GOD) Amaraticando: Yes, why?
(TA) David: What if he is super stronger??
(GOD) Amaraticando: please! He must be another emo
(TA) David: well...
(TB) BlackFrieza: Hey! You know what is happening here?
(GOD) Amaraticando: Of course. GODs can see everything that happens in the others world.

In LinkZer's room...

(TB) LinkZer: omg. I feel like somebody is watching me...
MrTh7: Who? only we two are here.
(TB) LinkZer: well...

In Wrayder's BED room...

(TB) Wrayder: i feel like somebody is watching me...
(ED) Jacotte: Who? only we two are here.
(TB) Wrayder: ok

In Amanda's house...

Amanda: It's strange... I felt like somebody were watching me when i was in the shower...

Ten minutes ago....

(GOD) Amaraticando: yes! yes! oh yes!


Back to the present, in Titan's Citadel City...

(TD) Tesha: Why you never helped us?!
(GOD) Amaraticando: Because we didn't know you all were so weak. Ok... how works this? ah, yes

Amaraticando turns on the blue sphere and he disappears from there.

Everybody: oooooh

Amaraticando landed in some strange world... It looks like a combination of all tracks...

(GOD) Amaraticando: WTF?! where I am?

A shadows was visible far away...

Unknown: Hi Amaraticando... What a surprise you are here.
(GOD) Amaraticando: who are you? show your face!
Unknown: You think you can beat me? hahaha! I challenge you for a race... where everything is legal. What do you say?
(GOD) Amaraticando: hahaha. I knew you were another fucking faker.
Unknown: Acept? or you are so gay?
(GOD) Amaraticando: hahaha! don't make me laugh! OK! I Acept the challenge!

The misterious guy get closer...

jaimeCTR: Nice. Because it will be hard for you all
(GOD) Amaraticando: oh my me!

and keep comment guys!

Dober wrote:

Amaraticando throw a strong rocket!! it goes to Fernando's face ...!!! but he walk at side and avoid the rocket and...!! the rocket crash with lells. lells explodes in 1000 parts and begins to rain his blood for everywhere. Everybody open their umbrellas.

jajajajajaajaja the bets part of all the chapters man poor lells

And fernando, jajaja what a gay emo
without doubts this was the best one Dob , hope to the next time will dead alpha, just a joke i am satisfied with the dead of lells

thanks, now i'm really in a good mood

i think it's the best chapter too for the moment, i laughed during all the chapter

i'm waiting the next =D

oh my god!!!

I was right about FERNANDO! HAHA!

I thought that I'm evil.

But Amara... HE IS MONSTER!!!!

Laughting my ass off

That was awesome, very funny!

And sorry for shoting lells, Fernando should be dead first.
And well, when i read that Fernando has a boss i imagined JAIMECTR!

And WTF:

Dober wrote:

In Amanda's house...

Amanda: It's strange... I felt like somebody were watching me when i was in the shower...

Ten minutes ago....

(GOD) Amaraticando: yes! yes! oh yes!

mmmm i dont see how that would offend some ppl because prob about 50%+? are -15 yo ;p
maybe make it 12
no im not 15 BTWrayder im 17

OMG!

what a pervert Amaraticando

Quote :

maybe make it 12

yeah, maybe. 12 is more offensive

Ok but probably amara did exactly like in the fiction sometimes I think

V4E wrote:

Ok but probably amara did exactly like in the fiction sometimes I think

Hey, not exactly! Maybe worse

.....or not

BTWrayder make these emotins with many ages

hahahaha

BTWrayder you can include those people as jaimectr's pals : NitroCTR, ShenLonq134, OxidecampeonCTR

alpha-plus wrote:

hahahaha

You didn't understand what i meant
Bah, forget it ok

I <3 those emoticons

And...

LinkZer, please add 'I'm with your mother and we have sex'

jajajajajaja

It is the old amaratic

http://img114.imageshack.us/my.php?image=atgaaadpdmcbwijkathjqosxq7.jpg

And dont tell me it looks like RBD (gay)

you looks like RBD

look what a pervert face, guys

and she is Amanda

awesome story!

I feel like animating a trailer for this story, but i don't have the time.

heres a quick sketch of Neo 1 and 2.